March 21, 2010

An Event In PROTON-- "Thank God It's Friday....!!!"

This was an awesome event in PROTON b-school,Indore on 19th march 2010. I also participated in this event.

This poem is dedicated to all my friends who told me to write this poem in my blog post.

Thank you so much for your precious appreciations; it really encouraged me a lot. I am writing it for you friends and topic you know and if not sooner you will get to know while reading.

Here comes...

"Hinduyo Ka Shamshan, Musalmano Ka Kabristan Aur Isaiyo Ka Graveyard,
Yani Bhartiya Sarkari Aspatal Ka General Ward;

Ward K Bhitar Bhartiya Loktantra Ki Tarah Dagamagata Hua Palang,
Aur Us Par Baithkar Apni Hi Maut Ki Tayyari Karte Huye Baba Malang;


Khud Apni Asliyat Par Shankka Karti Sarkari Dawaiyan,
Aur Ward Ke Bhitar Dikhti Maut Ki Parcchaiyan;


Bematlab Muskurata Hua Mahatma Gandhi Ka Chitra,
Aur Doctor To Aise Gayab Jaise Netao Se Charitra;


Gulshan Nanda Ka Upanyas Padhti Nurse,
Aur Akeli Nurse Ko Dekhkar Mariz Ki Aankho Mein Pida Ke Bavjud Harsh;


Itne Mein Mariz Ne Nurse Se Bola, Aaj To Meri Maut Ko Zindgi Bana Do,
Ho Ske! Ho Ske…!!! To Marte Waqt Pe To Muskura Do;


Tumhara Muskurana Mere Maut Mein Jaan Dal Dega,
Nurse Boli k Tumhe Dekhkar Muskurai To Doctor ,
To Docter Tumse Pehle Meri Jaan Nikal Dega;


Agar Private Ward Mein Hota To Muskurati,
Are Bewkuf Itna Bhi Nhi Janta K Muftakhoro K General Ward Mein,
Maut K Alawa Kisi Ko Hasi Nhi Aati...,,,Kisi ko nind nai aati;


Iski Hasi Me Na Jane Mariz Ka Dard Kaha Kho Gaya,
Bemaut Marne Walo Me Ek Aur Shamil Ho Gaya;


Ye wo Jagah Hai, Jaha Her Dil Apni Sanso Ko Khojta Hai,
Aur Docter Ko Bhagwan Maanne Se Pehle Har Mariz Kai Baar Sochta Hai;


Phir Bhi Yaha Zindagi Ka Palda Maut Per Hamesha Bhari Hota Hai,
Kyoki Bharat Me Her Miniute Ek Baccha Paida Hona Hardum Jaari Hota Hai;


Kyo Yaha Her Mariz Ko Apni Zindagi Daav Per Lagani Hoti Hai..?????
Aakhir In Docters Ko Aisi Kaun Si Daulat Kamani Hoti Hai…?????


Yaha Maut Aur Zindagi Ke Bich Jyada Pharak Nai Hota,
Kyoki Thik Se Let Kar Rone Ke Liye Ek Bed Tak Nasib Nai Hota;


Marne Ke Baad Ki Bhi Guarantee Nai Ki Kab Tumhe Uthaker Bahar Phek De,
Aur Chand Rupyo Ke Liye Tumhara Kaun Sa Ang Nikal Kar Bahar Bech De;


Band Karo Ye Tamasha Ab Aur Sahan Nai Hota,
Jala Do Aise Aspatalo Ko Jinhe Kisi Per Raham Nai Hota;


Jaha Docter "Manavta Aur Insaniyat" Ko Raund Chukka Hai,
Aur Marizo Ki Jaan Bachane Ki Kasam Kab Ka Bhul Chukka Hai;

Are.. Jab Tak Log Is Tarah Se Sasti Maut Marti Rahenge,
YAAD RAKHIYE..
Bharat Ki Pragati Per Har Roj Sawal Khade Hote Rahenge…
Bharat Ki Pragati Per Har Roj Sawal Khade Hote Rahenge…"

Thank You!!

20 comments:

Bhavesh Patel said...

Hi....

Nice Poem it is describe reality of the most of the Indian government hospital....

Mehul Bhesaniya said...

Hii,,
excelent observation on Indian Govt.Hospitals, doctors are like to take inputs( in form of salary),they are not puting their full efforts to give services(Treatment)related to their salary they are getting with high status.
---your view is totally true...
"Best of luck"

Ronak Shah said...

Hi, nicely written poem describing situation of government hospitals.
good effort and keep on writing.

akashjoshi said...

nice poem dear
keep it up

PROTON Shraddha said...

Thanks a lot Bhavesh, Mehul, Ronak and Aakash for commenting on blog.

Mudasir Amin Naik said...

beautiful poem...
U are a good writer...
keep it up!

Vidit Shah said...

Dear Shraddha,
A nice attempt to share your observation about the government hospitals in a poetic manner which is a tough task.
I appreciate your efforts and am waiting for blogs written by you in future.

Akshay Kothari said...

Hello ..
Nice peom..Keep it up !! and come up with more such great content.
Thanks

Anonymous said...

Hi........
Nice poem, you recite it very well during program.
All Government institutions are in same condition and it needs to be change.....Lets hope for one revolution for the same...
Nice poem.....keep it up
Yasmin Mansuri

PROTON Shraddha said...

Thank you for encouaging me PROTONS.
I will try to put my best effort in future also.

Ayush Agrawal said...

Awesome Poem Mam, " But the Indian Government is not That Bad"

Jagrat4life said...

Hi Shradha,
U hav gud creativity no doubt and also ur poem was pretty gud but something really important was missing... U hav toatally neglected d genuine, unbiased and selfless efforts of countless Indian Govt. Doctors who hav left golden pastures to serve humanity in true sense. I bliv der is so much scope 2 highlight der contributions within d purview of ur poem...
Just Jagrat

Meenketan Patel said...

Hello Friend,
Nice poem,I have a request to you. You should start Social Entrepreneurship because it is a way to fulfill poor people necessity with your own dream.In my opinion you want to do something for our society.
Go ahead...............

PROTON Shraddha said...

Ayush and Jagrat sir thank you for reading my blog. I want to say that it was a critic poem. I had to take one side and that is not bad. I totally agree of every coin has another side also.
Thank you Meenketan you always encourage me.

Shoaib Qureshi said...

Dear Shraddha,

Nice poem, couldnt hear the whole of it in the event, good that you blogged it.

Regards,
Shoaib Qureshi
http://soyasays.blogspot.com/

Satyawan Malhan said...

Hi
Nice poem,
It is good that you codded poem in blog.You narrated & wrote in a very nice manner. so, kep it up.

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Ankush Agrawal said...

bahut shaandar likha hai Didi,
All the posts of your blog is excellent.
One request,please use Hindi fonts for writing of Hindi poems. Sometimes one word can be misunderstood.
Waiting for new writings.

PROTON Shraddha said...

Thank a lot @ Ankur. I will take care of that.
Thank you Shoaib and Satyawan for reading my blog. It really mean a lot to me.

Neerz said...

Written amazingly....Ek katu tippani hai....Keep this great work ahead..

Kind Regards
Neer